Do you? Do you!!??
Cuz' what I'm sayin is that you should check this out, my proverbial bruthas and sistas. My first attempt at song writing. Just cuz I'm THAT pro.
Song #1
A Little Love
Verse 1:
When you feel like letting go
And it hurts to say hello
And the world comes crashing
Down upon you
Verse 2:When the world is on your shoulders
And the hurt is almost over
That's when you feel like giving
In completely
Chorus 1:But the end is almost here
And the dawn is oh so near
All you need is a little love
Somebody to help you through
And the pain is almost done
The war is nearly won
And all you need is a little love
A little love
Verse 3:Don't you think for a moment
That no one loved you here
'Cuz we all stare at your photograph
Through eyes all blurred with tears
Verse 4:And now we sit in pain
Wishing you back in vain
Things will never be the same
Without you
Chorus 2:Oh the end is almost here
The dawn is oh so near
All we need is a little love
Somebody to see us through
And when the pain it gets too much
Or life starts treatin' you too rough
Just remember that there's
Somebody who loves you
And when people pass you by
And you're hurting deep inside
Just remember
Somebody loves you
Somebody loves you
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Dude, that is really good. The 3rd and 4th verses reminded me of Mitch, though I'm not sure that's what you had in mind.
ReplyDeleteWhy thank you. It's actually funny and a little crazy, because I wrote this in like 10 minutes one night when I couldn't get to sleep and I had way too much runnin' through my head. I kind of wrote this, at least in part, because a kid at school just committed suicide a couple weeks back, and like I said, I had way too much runnin' through my head, and I was feeling...I don't even know how to describe it. But yeah, I thought, "Hey, I've written some songs and stuff before to deal with stuff, that's how I'll deal with this. And lots of people right now could use a little...something" you know?
ReplyDeleteAnd yeah, I was kinda thinkin' about Mitch there too a bit...